Review Detail of Kevin_Middleton in The Martial Unity

This is a quick review after 26 chapters. Our MC is a 59 year old trapped in a 13 year old’s body. Despite the author’s continued insistence that he is a genius, MC seems to act as a 13 year old well. My biggest gripe is that most chapters are chuck full of internal monologues. It makes for a very distracting read. We have seen the MC grow up in his new world, but the world still seems empty. All we know is that it’s a typical fantasy world with martial artists.