This is a quick review after 26 chapters. Our MC is a 59 year old trapped in a 13 year old’s body. Despite the author’s continued insistence that he is a genius, MC seems to act as a 13 year old well. My biggest gripe is that most chapters are chuck full of internal monologues. It makes for a very distracting read. We have seen the MC grow up in his new world, but the world still seems empty. All we know is that it’s a typical fantasy world with martial artists.

This is a history fan-fiction. Unfortunately it’s a very casual fan-fiction that contains many historical inaccuracies. It takes popular historical characters such as Cleopatra, Julius Cesar, and Merlin among others and brings them together in their childhood years. It’s a very lighthearted story. All these characters were born in different ages, but the story assumes they were alive at the same time and are all similar ages. I dropped after around 200 chapters since the character development was quite dull. If the characters were original I felt the story could be better.

8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.

I'm imagining it as a slightly longer chokuto as it seems to fit the description.

He had his head hit, but somehow broke his arm?

She was alarmed and just hit her head. Usually a sudden jolt would mean an increase I heart rate and this seems a bit low. I know you were going for a ”everything is normal”, but it would have been a little more realistic if the heart rate was in the 80s, which can also be considered normal but better fits the situation.

Was mentioned earlier that eating spiritual fruit raw would be akin to suicide. Oh, well.

It’s because he doesn’t need Spirit Stones. It’s mentioned in the story a few times. In the end he’d rather give those treasures away to act like a big shot and boost his ego.

Commented earlier about it, but this is what I originally thought made sense.

Who’s Alex? Should be Ning here.

8x or more better than his own Qi Cultivation technique.

Oh, he can teach magic skills. Makes sense why he didn’t choose filtration knowledge now. Seems a bit weird though since the skills kind of seem like they would be unique to him as an energy being.

My first thought. I thought the answer was pretty obvious. Hopefully he can leave once he gets them to the new island and gets them a new water source.

Great story so far. When reading I thought that since a lot of items are very expensive, there should be an unlock for a lottery system in the shop. A quest system might be cool too, but I wouldn’t want you to mess with the formula too much since the balance is pretty good right now.

*very , you’re doing a great job with spelling and grammar by the way. This was the only mistake I noticed so far.