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SUSHANT
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Just wanted to ask is this xuanhuan? Also, I would have liked for the author to properly explain the physical differences between a normal martial artist and martial apprentice rather than just a vague concept of martial path. Also, how different are people from earth and Gaea for those martial artists below the squire level to be able to perform those martial techniques which seemingly, is impossible for earthlings. In short, the power level before martial squire are too vague ,likewise, the differences in physical attribute to perform those techniques if mentioned would be a lot more helpful for readers to then understand your story and be more immersive in it. Good story, I hope it has a lot more plot and worldbuilding with even more chapters.

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The Martial Unity

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Hunt3rm4n
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I don't know man, I felt like it was pretty easy to understand, but maybe I'm just in tune with the author.