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The novel is good so far, I am only at the initial chapters and would like to ask if the currency to MP exchange rate will be given or not. Because, as of now it is not mentioned on how much usual earth currency equals 1 MP. This is a vital info and if this is addressed or not will greatly determine my immersion on the novel.
Her name could very well have been Jessica.
There always seem to be a girl and a drop dead gorgeous one at that, this time from the start. it irks me to no end. And God, oh god always a goofy one. Can't I find a novel that demand a little seriousness. I am already starting this novel with a bad taste; I don't know how this will turn up later on.
Just wanted to ask is this xuanhuan? Also, I would have liked for the author to properly explain the physical differences between a normal martial artist and martial apprentice rather than just a vague concept of martial path. Also, how different are people from earth and Gaea for those martial artists below the squire level to be able to perform those martial techniques which seemingly, is impossible for earthlings. In short, the power level before martial squire are too vague ,likewise, the differences in physical attribute to perform those techniques if mentioned would be a lot more helpful for readers to then understand your story and be more immersive in it. Good story, I hope it has a lot more plot and worldbuilding with even more chapters.
With lot of respect, i am saying you this the book really killed off many things for this novel. After a long time i am finally intrested in this novel of yours and just when it starts getting intresting you dropped a omniscience book(sigh), though i know you will put lots of restrictions for its usage, but the fact itself that our "mob" author/mc, will now be able to do things that were supposed to be vulnerable or do something in clutch moment not through a suspense or as a flow of the story driven by your imagination on the moment but through a random book is such a let down.I know cheats are necessary but next time if you are writing a book or novel i hope you let your imagination flow in such a way that let it be the author that will twist or arrange a clutch moment and not through cheat as it do helps you somewhat when those moment arrive. I hope you challange yourself more on your next project, my humble opinion.
I dont know who the Main character is anymore. No inner dialogue too much focus in side characters, author is trying too much to develop everyone equally and while character development is good but in the process i felt like i lost that connection with the main character and the feel with the story.