Review Detail of RAMichaels in Her Once Upon A Time Boyfriend

Author, you have done a great job by keeping us on our toes. You have built mystery at every corner. We want to know more about Anna, Lucas Chrystal and even Mara and her weird cousin Dave. You have created characters with such a sensible touch that we have to care about them. You have achieved greatness in your character development, but the world building is lacking. I do want to know about their dormitory, the college. Also please update and continue the story. It is a great one. Also I would update the cover. The picture is great but the title can be more prominent at the top and in a daring font. Make sure the author's name is added in a more catchy font as well. Cheers, Ra!