Review Detail of SCP_009 in Online In Another World

So far chap 79, a big turn off on the mushoku tensei similarities because it was obviously patterned on that. I can see the MC is a total simp with an unrealistic stupid personality big turn off too. Hats off though on world building and creating details. The author has good granmar and the descriptions make it vivid in my mind while imagining the scenarios. I reckon the author is definitely a simp. We can see that, that's why the personality leaks off a little on the MC through his writing. I want to see a lot of improvement on the author side on his writing, a little bit less simpy, a little more smart, a little more cautious and a little more merciless.