Review Detail of BookDragonling in Online In Another World
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I was interested to read about the world the MC chose and the potential of eventually going to the others. The grammar is excellent, the characters are well done and the world seems like it will be interesting. However, the MC runs into so many 'major events' that it feels slightly unrealistic. And this is all just on the way to the main Adventurers Guild location to sign up. Each 'event' lasts so many chapters that I just start skimming or skipping some entirely out of boredom. This will be a story where I wait for a build-up of chapters so that I can skim 50 of them just to get past one fight/arc.
Online In Another World
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I'm glad you enjoy it and that you will continue reading it, but I will say that if you find yourself skimming through things like the Unending Nightmare, the Outriders, etc--then the story probably just isn't fit for you. I am all about creating grand journeys with a flood of detours, so you can expect this in the future. I will say that it should've been expected that Emilio would encounter issues like these along the journey; I mean, there is a reason a high-end adventurer like Vandread was summoned to escort him lol.