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Review Detail of hydraspare in Online In Another World

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1. The writing quality is really good. The author makes almost no mistakes in the writing. Most of the time its only small typos and I barely saw any in the 60 chapters I read. The author also fixes them so all I can say is that the writing quality is good. 2. I don’t know about the writing consistency but it seems to be going well. 3. The story development is also good. Story is progressing at a great pace. Not too fast nor too slow. The twists are executed quite well and the story has a goal, I am clearly looking forward for more. 4. The character designs are quite unique and each of them have a unique personality. The MC and his family are quite a funny bunch. 5. For the world background, its still developing so I cannot say for sure but as of now we know the important information and some more, the world also seems to be quite thought of and we know of things that aren’t happening directly to the MC. In my opinion this story is a read well worth. Anywayy, now the system part of the story. As of chapter 55, the system only appeared once. I like the fact that it isn’t the focal point of the story because in most cases, the system ends up dictating every action of the MC which ends up making the story quite boring in my opinion. Finally, the introduction to the VRMMORPG world was a first and I believe that it was a breath pf fresh air compared to most other books lf this type. Tldr : Just read the book.

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