Review Detail of Sparkle_Sunshine in Plundering in the Apocalypse

Bad writing overall. The main character was initially introduced as an anti-social teenager, but a few chapters later, he underwent a drastic transformation into an extremely compassionate individual who could empathize and shed tears for the misfortunes of others. This change seemed to occur suddenly, lacking proper development. Moreover, he also adopted a self-righteous demeanor, firmly believing that his actions were right while condemning the actions of others. Secondly, this is the type of novel that incorporates excessive "speech" and "preaching" into the story, showcasing one of the less favorable aspects of Japanese writing style. Frequently, the main character delivers impromptu speeches in the midst of a battle randomly without rhyme or reason. Thirdly, there is an issue with the improper use of the first-person point of view. The writer appears to handle the third-person point of view proficiently, but for some unknown reason, he randomly introduce and misuse the first-person point of view in the story. Regardless of which point of view is used, there is no discernible difference in storytelling within this novel, making the shifts in point of view seem unnecessary and redundant.