Review Detail of Ar7_Storm in Beast Evolution

Overall it is fine idea and good story for newbies. Indeed it had great potential. Ray start from someone literally always rnning away, now bcame someone up to the challenge. Sorry but for me, you may wish to added more character like Lily and his little pet to gave more feeling to the story. but who i am but a noob. so well. Keep it up Author. Learn and keep your progress. I like it so far.