Ar7_Storm
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Ar7_Storm1yrCommentedhahahahaha. loll
Again, he received judging eyes that looked at him as if he was a creep, but he didn't mind. He was too happy and energized to feel awkward about it. He then drove his car to his office.- Ar7_Storm1yrCommentedCh 7 "I'll be the most good person you'll ever meet!"
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whehehe, hilarious... Lol🤣
"Ah, right, aside from sleep. I forgot to eat." he mumbled to himself. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
It's ok. It's good. 5 won't be much
- Do five push-ups - Ar7_Storm1yrReplied to royalgrim
whahahaha, LOL, I'm dying.
- Drink a liter of water - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
indeed my friend...
"Rich people really have loose screws." - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
maybe he need some water first
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crazy adult
He got out of his car and rolled onto the grass carpet of the playground like a crazy adult playing at the park at 2 am. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
whehehe, I almost spit my drink reading that. lol
The ghost was dressed as a lady in a white gown, but she wasn't as feminine as the white ladies he'd seen in movies. The translucent lady has well-defined muscles that contrast with her long, straight black hair and attractive features. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented*Iron Harrow is a... a... Revolver. Well, just the name that sounds fancy, but it practically just a regular seven chamber revolver. The image are basically like this.
- Ar7_Storm1yrCommentedCh 18 Worth 500 Million
- Ar7_Storm1yrReplied to Damein_Jaschke_1980
oh, oh. Such claim you made made me aware of few things i had already read. a reason or a cause backed of few words that put the reader into descriptive line along the story that happen on a scale by which a background or things in the story is start to halucinate, or made the the reader into a pool of imagination where they can relate things as it is. 🤓
As before, the tap broke when I tried to open it and the water started to spew out; I ignored it, and put my mouth into the water trying to drink as much as possible. I looked like a man who was lost in the desert and found an oasis for the first time in days. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommentedOn the other hand, when he was still 12, his mother brought home a pretty girl who was three years younger than him; her name was Meng Qi. Her parents had passed away, leaving her alone since no other family member wanted to take care of her.
- Ar7_Storm1yrCommentedCh 19 The Power of Imagination is beyond Your Imagination
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Yes, yes. lot's of them so striking that i feel like, i don't really know what is novel.
Actually, if you calm down and think about it, these readers that offer you their criticism are the cutest of all. If you as an author can seriously read through their opinions about your story, I'm sure that you can improve yourself as an author as well. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
yes. yes. I as a reader liking more if there's chapter title. It beat my heart like a title of a song.
However, as long as you don't have any problem elements in your chapter names, even a boring chapter name is better than no chapter name at all. A table of contents that only has chapter numbers in it will look really unappetizing to readers. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
i'm alive and well. It's a plot armor, baby. I'm still in need.
As for the example of where you killed off a character and now regret doing so because you wanted to use that character again later, this is quite a difficult situation to analyze. We need to weigh the pros and cons and see which wins out in the end. For instance, if your novel is a suspense type novel, it might even be a good thing to kill off one of the main characters that all your readers believed would survive to the end, as this will increase the overall feeling of suspense and tension in your novel. In that case, you can keep your storyline, and change the later plot you wanted to use and have it revolve around a different character instead. Or, you'll have to write a scenario where this character suddenly comes back to life or was only faking their death. - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
hahahahaha ROTFL*
For example, let's say the plot of your story has the main character going out on a shopping trip because his mother asked him to buy some groceries. However, if you don't put any limits on yourself, and just write whatever comes into your mind, maybe the main character will save a little child on his way to the grocery store, and then he meets the kid's older sister, who just happened to be under unwanted romantic advances by a hooligan. And when your main character is done defeating the hooligan, a white-bearded immortal just happened to pass by and take your main character in as a disciple… Once the main character finished cultivating, one hundred years have already passed by… - Ar7_Storm1yrCommented
I see.
This is why newcomer authors should avoid this useless type of "creativity" as much as possible. You should simply rely on settings that all readers are familiar with instead.