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Review Detail of Olympu in THE RISE OF THE FORGOTTEN GODS

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I have read up to chapter 6. Phew, let's dive into this. Before I do, I need to tell you to take my words with a grain of salt. Some of this will be factual based, others by my opinion. And some might change over the chapters as the Author improves. I recommend you read all of it. -Writing Quality The writing quality is descriptive, like the Author is trying to flex their writing muscles. Of course, this doesn't mean they're perfect. I came across little grammar impediments during the chapters I have read. I can vividly imagine what the author describes, the fights are extremely interesting as well. -Updating Stability I have no idea what to say for this one, but I would assume the Author posts every day or keeps to a schedule. -Story Development In 6 chapters MC has found a elf like hot dude looking for something in the forest she woke up in. Then they started fighting wolves and worms. Keep in mind, in the first chapter MC had no idea where she was. By luck, she became a fat dude and found a guy battling a snake. Very fast paced. -Character design I guess this is why people say 10 chapters minimum for a review... -World Background I can tell the Author probably used a generator for the names of places and monsters. If they're pulling all of this out of their ass, then I commend them. You've read this? Good for you! You want a sticker? This book overall seemed interesting, but since I'm not into cultivation I didn't like it. But it's refreshing, unlike thousands of copy and paste novels with 500 chapters of Young Master slapping. The whole trope of cultivation is trash to me, but you can sometimes find a gold brick inside of that trash. Good luck to you Author. -Olympu

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THE RISE OF THE FORGOTTEN GODS

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Thanks for the very detailed and critical review. Helps me a lot. I will go back and check the chapters for the grammatical errors again. no....i don't have a name generator. trying to come up with them from my imagination, and it is really very hard work :))

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DaoistNotAvilableAuthorDaoistNotAvilable

Thanks for the very detailed and critical review. Helps me a lot. I will go back and check the chapters for the grammatical errors again. no....i don't have a name generator. trying to come up with them from my imagination, and it is really very hard work :))