Review Detail of TheGeekWhoLived in A Song of Ice and Fire: Raenon Targaryen

{My Previous review(deleted): Overhyped. When I saw 4.9+ rating and read some reviews saying it is one of the best GOT fics, I was very eager to read it. But it turned out to be a disappointment. Poorly written, too cringy. Character designing was bad.} Now that I've overcome my disappointment, I think I can give a better review than 'poorly written'. It was a decent enough fic, I suppose; I just had a lot of expectations about its quality and plot (again coz it has a 4.9+ rating for ~30 users rating it). The story seems to be written by an amateur author with some admittedly good ideas. The scenes are written forcefully emotional. The MC doesn't act as smart as he seems to think he is. I didn't like how the author dealt with MC and Daenerys' relationship. The author should have taken more time to establish their relationship instead of using the Dreams to force the issue upon them and make Daenerys act on it immediately, pushing it on an uncomfortable MC within just a few hrs of their meeting. I can understand she has been harbouring feelings for him for a long time and is emotionally taxed by the previous events; still, it is too cringy and poorly executed. I don't even know what to say about their brilliant idea to actively try for a second kid (the first was an accident, that's fine, I suppose) when they were obviously preparing for war. So, yeah... I wasn't motivated to go further after reading the family's poorly written meeting with Robb Stark and the Blackfish at Riverrun(Ch.27 ig). This just isn't the story for me.