Review Detail of _drop in Picking up Girls With My System

Not AI generated - that's good. Grammar that doesn't make eyes bleed (but that's the best way to describe it). Empty story, world and characters. Braindead dialogues. Overall flow of storytelling is at best awkward. Main plot - 2/5, boring, happens just cause Jokes - 1/5, when they happen you wish they didn't Dialogues and character chemistry - 2/5, gives a feeling of a play by ten year olds Cultured stuff - 2/5, short, rushed, plain, boring,...