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_drop1mthCommentedWasn't his backstory being a druglord?
This ability of his, to keep his emotions reined in, was one of the reasons behind his rapid rise up the corporate ladder.- _drop1mthCommented'A man can deal with the quirks of a single woman,' he thought before heaving yet another sigh. 'Dealing with a whole bunch of them?' the young man shook his head. 'Maybe that's why harems mostly come from the hands of virgin authors?'
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I can mention one - that degenerate even managed to place gym on third floor right above music class...
Sure, they had yet to clear it from the zombies, but due to the simple physical features, the training grounds of the school were located on the very bottom floor of the northern wing. After all, what kind of sane architect would put a place for a mass of students to jump around anywhere but on the ground floor? - _drop1mthPosted
Was an awesome novel, but then soulless machines abducted author and now it became unbearable to read. Somewhere around chapter 1280 author (or maybe editor) tries to start incorporating new and hot technologies, so at about 1400 it becomes really hard to read without help of an AI to decode and shorten all that was written with its help. Pretty disappointing for such a good story. If someone reads further down the story - tell me if that obsession with generating lots of useless words in most flashy and descriptively repetitive way possible dies down. Maybe I'll try braving through it, but for now it's just too much. Note to author: you made a very good story and your writing was awesome with its own style and charm, but now it's just same as reading an AI generated promo. Don't know whose fault it is, but it's very sad. Even if you didn't use AI to write those chapters but simply tried to make your writing more "professional" (which I don't believe by the way) you've greatly overdone it, ruining all the pacing and enjoyment of reading it. Also comment of that AI fever ever gets better or even better - cured.
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Not AI generated - that's good. Grammar that doesn't make eyes bleed (but that's the best way to describe it). Empty story, world and characters. Braindead dialogues. Overall flow of storytelling is at best awkward. Main plot - 2/5, boring, happens just cause Jokes - 1/5, when they happen you wish they didn't Dialogues and character chemistry - 2/5, gives a feeling of a play by ten year olds Cultured stuff - 2/5, short, rushed, plain, boring,...
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And is a small city And has lax security
They walked inside the only inn the city had. It was big and had many rooms. Maybe that was the reason Rento had only one inn. This place was so big it could fit a lot of travelers. - _drop2mthReplied to Kinglur
Well, that was mature... Translation: Moreover, what's the point of leaving comment in russian to a book written in english
The journey, which lasted about an hour, was largely silent, with Dmitri listening to foreign pop music that even the driver thought was too... feminine. - _drop2mthReplied to LordSirius
The one from Profane Prince of Domination
Birth of the Ultimate Shameless Duo - _drop3mthCommented
"despite having no cultivation" or "despite not cultivating"
Yes, despite having any cultivation, Amaya was able to control her Mist. - _drop3mthCommented
This movie forever ruined that name for me)
Isabel. - _drop4mthReplied to Bend59
Nope, it's way funnier the way it is
"Oh? This, it's nothing." Nux shrugged his soldier and then, his cultivation returned back to normal! - _drop4mthCommented
Author, if you ever decide to edit old chapters - fix names in this. I believe princess mentioned here should be Evane
The person he wanted to support, the Second Princess Quiriana Skyfall was not interested in the Throne and didn't participate in this race. - _drop4mthCommented
Newton be like)
All other variables being equal, more speed means more power. The Grand Priestess had not yet released her seal, yet the might of her blows had reached abnormal levels, sending Mithras reeling left and right. - _drop4mthCommented"Those are communication artifacts. You six can communicate with each other. I have no idea why you got it since in the next few trials, you're gonna die anyway. But whatever."
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Now I'm even more intrigued in why and how is he marasmus...
"Everyone, the Great God of Resurrection, Sino D'Mara, has blessed us with his divine providence! For the next hour, your attacks against demons will inflict twice the damage and you will rapidly heal from all wounds. On top of that, death will no longer stop you, as you will be able to rise endlessly regardless of what happens to you!" The Saint Princess Aliza spoke out with a gentle cry. - _drop6mthCommented
It needs discounts with numbers in thousands to be truly genuine)
He saw many things like 'Limited time sale", "Premium gift pack" and more with huge timers and flashy cartoonish advertisements for them. The counter itself was manned by an anthropomorphic rabbit that was chewing a carrot. - _drop6mthReplied to _drop
Especially in context of Greek mythology (prometheus and what not)
In fact, they had expected heavier terms since their livers were literally in his hands. Him using such liberal terms showed them that Darius valued their free will and hoped to win their allegiance with this. - _drop6mthReplied to Kotario
Kek, reading second time and still thinking that was a metaphor)
In fact, they had expected heavier terms since their livers were literally in his hands. Him using such liberal terms showed them that Darius valued their free will and hoped to win their allegiance with this. - _drop6mthReplied to AnubeseteshDarius gazed at Jonathan. "You will awaken Death, Gravity, Metal, Explosion, and Fire. Your main element will be Fire and your secondary Death."
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Wet dream of network admins
"Acknowledged… creating…. Done. Supreme Portal intranet created. Detecting network limitations… detected no limitations, the network can handle any load."