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Review Detail of Kainedei in Halo Reborn

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Kainedei
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First, the first chapter is just a log, it's not even a chapter. Second, the MC has everything given away and that's not bad, the problem is that he gets everything from the beginning and without any effort. Third, why is God/author going to improve the intelligence of MC, who is one of the most intelligent humans in history? He could give him some other ability that would be useful or improve his strength or speed a little, but instead of that improves the intelligence of one of the most intelligent humans, really? and for what?, so that he then behaves like a conceited idiot who knows everything and shows his abilities, that is, his inhuman intelligence to the ONI, yes of course, as if the ONI did not mutilate people, murder children or exterminate planets just because they think different from them.

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Halo Reborn

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SexyYoungMaster
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Inexperiences*

SexyYoungMaster:Author isn’t smart and it reads like he used chat gpt to fill in his inabilities. This the worst type of author.
Kainedei
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The level of writing is fine, the only problem with this story as far as my patience went, chapter 2, is the mc, one thing is being intelligent, another is being an idiot and the mc is an idiot.

Felixxx
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That's one of the most glaring problems of trying to write a smart/genius MC, the author isn't that smart.

SexyYoungMaster
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Author isn’t smart and it reads like he used chat gpt to fill in his inabilities. This the worst type of author.

Felixxx:That's one of the most glaring problems of trying to write a smart/genius MC, the author isn't that smart.