Review Detail of BaeVida in Empress of the Entertainment World

Feel free to drop your questions, i would respond to it.

yes of course. i love your writing author. always got me hooked. hopefully this will excite me too.

thanks darling

Just picked up the book under daily recommendation. so far (5 chapters), so good and it's good that the FL is no pushover and the ML a gentleman that intends to take responsibility. Hope the novel do not get draggy with too many side stories that ends up making the novel looks like 3 in 1. So far, well done author

besides know that side stories are an important aspect of a story, our ml n FL's have lives n friends as well, most times u may not see d link now, but trust me, there wud b a link. At d very least the book that portrayed that the most, that I have written is Astrid - The Hybrid Princess because if the kingdoms, and every character is as important. Learn that my dear.

Thanks so much. I hope I didn't come off as harsh with my reply. I just wanted you to see and understand.

Understandable . And side stories of supporting characters are important. Apologies if we are not on the same wave length. Some readers love to read a story across 2-3 generations hence I noticed some on Webnovel, goes on beyond 1500. Some readers like me, an old career woman, reads for entertainment and I find that some stories actually has 3 -6 main characters stories in one novel, and I find it a bit much, coz the writing style though good, but as a reader (or readers like me) find it hard to follow the flow as the last chapter talking about couple AB for instance was 5 chapters earlier. That's my experience so far on this platform. However, I do follow one novel where the author expand the other couples stories in another volume. That's easier to follow .

No problem. I was just expressing my views after being on this platform for a year. The longest novel I have read with 1 strong couple and 2 supporting couples was about 700 chapters. There are other supporting characters but their stories were short and details summarized in relevant scenes. There's also one story on 2nd and 3rd generation but the 3rd generation was expanded across 5 cousins out of which 3 couples stories was built in 1 novel. I ended skipping chapters that started with another couple stories coz it was too much for me. Some readers can take it . I like how you have started the story and would like to see through if I can afford time and coins. you are doing good with this one so far. Thanks for responding to my comments ☺️

Thank you so much dear. I just wanted to give you an insight to how I write and what to expect. I'm sorry if I was harsh in anyway. Never intended to. Thanks for your support. ❤️

I understand you now. Some readers would complain having a side character to begin with lol. For this book, I haven't given my side characters proper screen time lol. hahha. but I would ensure not to drag or prolong. Thanks.

Since I liked your 'Flames Of Desire', I wanted to give this novel a try aswell. I just have one question though. Will there be a love interest that gets in-between the main leads? Lately I've been seeing alot of authors reusing the concept of FL falling in love with another man at the start before she gets over it and falls for the ML, which is quite annoying

Oh, I understand what you mean. Well it's advisable to have ml n FL get close and stuff and I understand that too. From your question well, FL loved someone else but he cheated on her a night to her wedding and she found out she's been used. Although I did not start the story from the part where she was in love with someone else first... in this case, she had loved someone 5 years ago, got rejected, loved another and got cheated on which lead to how she met ml. Smiles... this concept would fall under another book where I will speak on FL's love interest before letting her b with d specific ml. does that answer your question

Yeah, that is fine. What i meant is FL falling in love with some man in the middle of the story. Alot of authors seem to be using this to force the ML to get jealous and take action. seems like this isn't happening in this novel so thanks for telling me

Oh I see. No, no, no. My FL is only going to love ml once she opens her heart. He would get jealous with those around her but her heart is strictly for him. Also, I tried to portray what misunderstanding and lack of communication can do to people in relationships here as well. But both ml n fl scaled through each time. Thanks so much for giving this book a try. It warms my heart.