Review Detail of Blazing_1NS4N1TY in Talent Swallowing System
Review detail
I've read a number of these types of books, and without fail, the author will drop skills, have wildly incorrect levels, and, most annoyingly, forget usable skills that make the fight, arc, and even the whole story completely illogical. This book is an exception. Everything, including the intro, is done in either a unique or fresh way. I am currently 200+ chapters in (so hopefully only 1/10th through đ) and vinayraj has managed to- a: never write a boring/pointless chapter (no filler) b: keep a fast pace while still fleshing out characters and lore -and as I said in the beginning- c: utilize the system extremely well, as it is an integral part of the story. He does this without forgetting skills, and manages to keep readers up to date on (actually correct) levels while not constantly spamming copy and pasted stats to increase the word count. I strongly recommend this book and am personally really looking forward to the to seeing where this story leads! đđđ
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except you are incorrect sir, the author forgets his own numbers countless times, writing different numbers (sometimes being off by 1000%+), states the wrong character name (Ryan and Lia get confused a lot) and changes skill names from one paragraph to the next. I actually started putting paragraph comments to point these out after running into 100 plus of these mistakes before even ch 50..... where it is a good book, honest reviews are needed so the author can grow as well.
I'm pretty sure that is not the case, and I'm positive that this isn't the case now. I honestly find glaring mistakes grating. If what you are saying was true, then this review would state it.
Steven_Smith_1510:except you are incorrect sir, the author forgets his own numbers countless times, writing different numbers (sometimes being off by 1000%+), states the wrong character name (Ryan and Lia get confused a lot) and changes skill names from one paragraph to the next. I actually started putting paragraph comments to point these out after running into 100 plus of these mistakes before even ch 50..... where it is a good book, honest reviews are needed so the author can grow as well.
except I JUST read these chapters.... like in the past 3 days. the author knows I'm speaking truth as he has been editing everything I've been pointing out. like I said, honest reviews help the author.
Blazing_1NS4N1TY:I'm pretty sure that is not the case, and I'm positive that this isn't the case now. I honestly find glaring mistakes grating. If what you are saying was true, then this review would state it.
yeah I went through what you posted. yes there were a few errors, but, as I said, they are only a few. compared to the vast majority, this book is fantastic. A few errors when a book does not have an editor are to be expected. however story breaking, annoying, or repetitive errors are not found in this book.
Steven_Smith_1510:except I JUST read these chapters.... like in the past 3 days. the author knows I'm speaking truth as he has been editing everything I've been pointing out. like I said, honest reviews help the author.
a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.
Blazing_1NS4N1TY:yeah I went through what you posted. yes there were a few errors, but, as I said, they are only a few. compared to the vast majority, this book is fantastic. A few errors when a book does not have an editor are to be expected. however story breaking, annoying, or repetitive errors are not found in this book.
I guess we can go back and forth for awhile, but the review is solid. I've pointed out mistakes here and there as well. but you are forgetting that this is a self published book. you have made 2 points, one is the Ajax thing and the other is a single leveling (I think) mistake. my point is, that is phenomenal for this platform. if there are issues, raj will go out of his way to fix them on top of communicating with readers. try pointing out something like that to the d*uche (years later and am still am not sure what will get censored) who writes blood warlock.
Steven_Smith_1510:a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.
I guess we can go back and forth for awhile, but the review is solid. I've pointed out mistakes here and there as well. but you are forgetting that this is a self published book. you have made 2 points, one is the Ajax thing and the other is a single leveling (I think) mistake. my point is, that is phenomenal for this platform. if there are issues, raj will go out of his way to fix them on top of communicating with readers. try pointing out something like that to the d*uche (years later and am still am not sure what will get censored) who writes blood warlock.
Steven_Smith_1510:a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.
Ajax is MC from book that has 1500+ chapters written by author and was âpostponedâ or dropped for this book for a contest another book also hasnât been updated either for even longer I assume other wrong names are from other book I agree there are a lot of mistakes in this book and errors especially with names of characters and abilities/skills but just to clarify Ajax is a character from new age summoners which is a great book but hasnât been updated In a long time due to this book which I read up to chapter 150 and was one of first readers of this book but was disappointed of quality versus other book but author stopped all other stories so just started reading works of other authors anyways wanted to say you were right blazing is incorrect and ajax is another MC name have a great day and glad to see other say it like it is like me
Steven_Smith_1510:a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.
Blazing_1NS4N1TY:I guess we can go back and forth for awhile, but the review is solid. I've pointed out mistakes here and there as well. but you are forgetting that this is a self published book. you have made 2 points, one is the Ajax thing and the other is a single leveling (I think) mistake. my point is, that is phenomenal for this platform. if there are issues, raj will go out of his way to fix them on top of communicating with readers. try pointing out something like that to the d*uche (years later and am still am not sure what will get censored) who writes blood warlock.