then why list it as a skill? skills are either active, or passive..... you're already including the magic based mastery skill passive, I can see this causing confusion later on, but that's just my opinion.

either or works???? I mean, what was the point of this comment exactly? I mean.... say something like "a rare race rarely seen" seems a bit of a tongue twister, might I suggest "a rare race scarcely seen" or "a rare race not often seen", ect ect.... as ALL of those mean the same thing.

it stated at the beginning that this game allows EVERYONE to learn ANY skill as long as they had the skill points. from deductive reasoning, the skills they are talking about would be learning them normally (like the Mc is currently doing) instead of skill points being used..... otherwise the human racial trait would be pointless.

forgot the sword training skill he just got in the last chapter......

also... if the author wants, I can give my discord and proofread, as I really do enjoy this book.

a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.

except I JUST read these chapters.... like in the past 3 days. the author knows I'm speaking truth as he has been editing everything I've been pointing out. like I said, honest reviews help the author.

surprise grade?

Ajax again??? the mysterious side hero

who exactly is Ajax, and why would moving his hand affect Leo exactly?????

this review I back completely. whereas the author needs to learn to proofread before publishing, the story and style are refreshing.

except you are incorrect sir, the author forgets his own numbers countless times, writing different numbers (sometimes being off by 1000%+), states the wrong character name (Ryan and Lia get confused a lot) and changes skill names from one paragraph to the next. I actually started putting paragraph comments to point these out after running into 100 plus of these mistakes before even ch 50..... where it is a good book, honest reviews are needed so the author can grow as well.

perhaps you meant "return sirs generosity"??? I mean, Leo has no reason to feel gratitude towards people he helped.... thats backwards......

so now it's a size comparison???? perhaps you meant "wait" longer than me????? seriously.....proofreading does wonders....

get him "under control" maybe????? seriously, do you not even read what you type????

you mean "even WITHOUT the God stone" ...

got the wrong person again....

seeing that Leo and himself were in trouble? maybe you should actually proof read what you write?

once again, this sentence should be the opposite .....

so the bid went DOWN 9 mil? pretty sure that's not how auctions work.....