I just hope you describe the looks of them mc more thoroughly like those chiniese nove sword eyebrows jade skin and imortal aura and what not it's also hope the mc dosent hide his powers like in many other novels with similar types of premise the mc acts week to stay lowkey and the girl being his partner will be hotblooded and people think he hides behind the girl also hope you add the concept of other world and world travel it might be a good idea to add something like outer gods from love craft but a nerfed version and mc powers to be something like conceptually like atoms manipulation or transmutation idk
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