Review Detail of Four_Clover in A Tribute Becomes A Jumper

You've kinda ruined the first arc tbh. If you didn't give him so many perks, the level of immersion in Hunger Games could've been felt, but since he's basically Captain America with all buffs and technical knowledge most readers don't know of, the immersion was ruined and the first world basically became his playground without any tension. You should've given him the abilities after winning, maybe even some romance with Glimmer that would ultimately end in her death plus some drama or something, but no, you pushed in the cliche System at the start. Wasted potential, you have good writing but your planning is wack. Don't assume readers know what you are talking about, explain the powers to them slowly not info dumps with 10% actual plot. It's rare to have a Hunger Games Ff nowaday. Anyway, the novel isn't for me, but I wish you luck in your future works. You have a unique immersive writing but you can't capture realism in it's essence. I hope you continue to improve.