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Review Detail of BookWorms007 in Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player

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BookWorms007
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It is a good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. However, world background need to be improved.( what disease does the MC have? Why was he ill in the first place? Is the game real? Would the strength that he accumulated in the game be applicable in real life as well? How did he go back in time? what about the family of MC? Why was he back stabbed? ......) We as readers are kept in the dark regarding these crucial information. A lot of these questions need to be answered atleast partially so that readers can empathise with the character that the author is trying to portray. All we see in the first 150 chapters is MC trying to do some quests and attaining a unique class. It feels as if we are reading the walkthrough of a game . Try to give more information regarding the MC so that we as readers can relate to the MC

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HomuraRyuu
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i agree, but if you're here only for the game genre then it should be fine to read, if you didn't care that much about the other little details beside the game aspect.

Ah0324
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I know this is late but I don’t think you read this story properly, he has Hyper-Cognitive Overload Sickness(aka H-COS), he was born with it and it was an advance kind, no answer for that one yet,do you mean from the last life or this life,idk, he’s an orphan and his parents were only child so no aunts or uncles to adopt him, I don’t think they backstabbed him technically they gatekeeper him from finding out that his illness could be cured easily with his standing and they did it out of jealousy and fear of his talent.