It seems cliche and it think it's getting worse because it seems like everything revolves around Mc even though he is insignificant in terms of cultivation. Let me give u an example his adoptive brothers sister who may be 30 gets angry from his sisters son for ignoring him i mean what kind of childish stuff is this he is 30 for God's sake even I would not be offended by such a small thing and I'm 15 this novel needs to stop such childish interactions I have seen alot of them already on other novels but I the concept is fresh as someone said I will give it a try if it improves I will stay around giving power stones .
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LIKECriticalReader:your right... the characters are too childish and arrogant