Review Detail of Arzoch in The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

The story skips around too much, like one week will just go by and everything that we wanted to see is just gone. I feel like the author needs to take more time to establish the relationships and develop the world.The way interactions happen seem off and lack substance. I'm not sure how to explain it. The book has potential but i think it just needs to be slower. maybe adding in some chapters that are purely character development early on would do a great deal to the overall story. It is worth a read, but don't expect anything amazing.