Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in When the Reader Descends Into the Novel With a System

The story seems interesting, there is a lot of thought that goes into the characters, updates seem consistent, writing is good, and there is tons of content. I would like to see a bit more description about what the characters look like and on what the setting is like. I'd also like to just see a bit more dialogue among the characters in the beginning. The world building is next level though.