Review Detail of Eugene_OMalley in The Guardian of Rynnlee

The story has a decent balance of different elements. It does well in showing that its MC is a world-weary man, while preserving the mystery of his experience. Each setting is well crafted to paint a good mental picture. And the way it's written, the character's inner turmoil can be clearly felt. The pacing is relaxed, but nothing to complain about. Only gripe is that some of the MC's self loathing inner monologue seems to be rather heavy handed and melodramatic. Aside from that, I think this is shaping up to be a good read.