Review Detail of uptherenow22 in First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse

Interesting premise undermined by poor writing. The author's grammatical errors make this story hard to read. Aside from the grammatical errors, the pacing for the story is a little off and the characters are uninspiring. I found it hard to make an emotional attachment with any of the characters of this novel, and I fail to see how people are rating this as five stars. I see the vision, but the execution of this novel is poor.