There are a lot of things that could be improved, but this totally put me off at the interference of the gods, I hate it so it's a "Meh" for me. anyway, good luck to anyone who wants to try to read this.
Nilo_A
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LIKEI'm with you there.. it should have just been a random Reincarnation , it didn't have to be a by a god. and the god even showed up at the beginning like why can't it be at the end of the book. And like the guy just showed up and be like " I killed you and brought you here you will work for me" and the MC be like "ok"..I don't like it when the MC is straight up being controlled If he chose so then it's no biggie but this Nah