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Crocs_is_Dead
Crocs_is_DeadAuthor2yrCrocs_is_Dead

Yo, I am Crocs, and this is my first time trying my hand in writing novels. There are definitely shortcomings, but I’m learning more as I continue to write the story. Hope you guys enjoy it!

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Void Evolution System

Crocs_is_Dead

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Saad12121212
Saad12121212Lv1Saad12121212

Your novel sucks Bannanas crocs

Zerus
ZerusLv15Zerus

please tell me that Elena is not a sadist

Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13Jheydi327

No romance ?

Crocs_is_Dead
Crocs_is_DeadAuthorCrocs_is_Dead

There’s romance. I just didn’t add the romance tag since the harem tag is already there and I didn’t feel the need

Jheydi327:No romance ?
Shadow_monarch4322
Shadow_monarch4322Lv3Shadow_monarch4322

Lemons??

Rachmansyah
RachmansyahLv1Rachmansyah

am i the only one who thinks the cover looks like mori calliope

Quintessential_Guy
Quintessential_GuyLv13Quintessential_Guy

The vibe of the novel is good so don't rush and please don't drop it.

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

op mc?? lemons??

THE_CURSED_1224
THE_CURSED_1224Lv2THE_CURSED_1224

is there action (it is not mentioned in tags)

Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

will he end up with only 1 wife

Thetickingtime
ThetickingtimeLv2Thetickingtime

hm

Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv13Jorlat123

You should add Romance tag. Seasoned readers see Romance and Harem tags differently. IMO, if its Harem only then I assume that the MC is just collecting pokemon and there's barely to no development between MC and his harem. While if it has Romance then we expect to see fluff moments and development progress between him and the girls.

Crocs_is_Dead:There’s romance. I just didn’t add the romance tag since the harem tag is already there and I didn’t feel the need
MAJESTY1
MAJESTY1Lv6MAJESTY1

I love your writing ....very engaging and the concept used is very interesting ......keep up the good work

Technoris
TechnorisLv14Technoris

Thats because it is

Rachmansyah:am i the only one who thinks the cover looks like mori calliope
Dao_of_mischeif
Dao_of_mischeifLv4Dao_of_mischeif

Honestly at the point I am in I jusyt love the novel and I don't usually do this unless I actually like it which is the suggestion where u do bonus chapters for power stones and tickets For example every 200 chapters u add an extra chapter than the original upload rate this will excite alot of people and make them use there power stones on ur novel

GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14GAMING_IS_MUST

dude PLEASE explain everything about classes and ranks its confusing when I keep reading and don't even know the proper power levels, ur world building needs some SERIOUS work

ForceRecon
ForceReconLv1ForceRecon

Zeds dead baby, zeds dead

ZombiePat
ZombiePatLv4ZombiePat

still on chapter one, but I love it already

Tjpeterson96
Tjpeterson96Lv15Tjpeterson96

Hey you're that guy in the GAB discord!

Krittibash_Sarma
Krittibash_SarmaLv11Krittibash_Sarma

i really like your work... but the prices are too much now... i cant use 11 or 12 coins for 1 chapter