Review Detail of Evelena21 in Leveling Up Wives In The Apocalypse

I honestly gave this a chance. I have read about 150+ chapters so far, but I don't think I can continue on. This novel had really good romance and good r18 scenes. I enjoyed the romance and his relationship with Nadia and the other wives but the poor writing for the apocalypse stuff is a big negative of this novel. The writing is so confusing. I had very hard time picturing what the author was trying to portray. The author goes straights to the action without painting the picture of the setting first, like what happened during the first arc. The author failed to properly lay out the setting of the school, so when the mc was doing things related to the setting, it only ended up confusing the readers. Some scenes were like all over the place that I just can't follow what is happening anymore. Then there is also the fact that the author tends to be redundant: a character says this then another character says it again, feels like the author is only dragging things out to increase word count. Characterization is also flawed. Daria and Leila were portrayed to have this personality, only for it to become the total opposite later on. The main wife Nadia also had this flawed characterization. At the first, you would have an idea that her morals were already thrown out of the window pretty early on, but then the author decides to give her morals back at later chap to the point of even arguing with the mc. She would be the last one among his wives to question his decision and have an argument with him when all this time she supported the mc even if he was wrong or did questionable stuff. I am just a bit irritated since I like her character a lot but the author isn't giving her proper justice with the poor writing. In short the characterization is all over the place. They would have this personality at first then later on that personality changes a little. This not only happens with the wives but almost all characters including the mc. The author really needs to improve his world building and properly laying out the setting. I continued to 150+ just to see if this aspect would improve but it did not, and I cant bear with it anymore. This was good concept and the romance were really good, something the author was really good at. I enjoyed the romance aspect so much, but the action, world building, way of portrayal of the setting is ticking me off. Since this is majorly action, the negatives outweighed the positives thus my reason for not being able to continue on.