Review Detail of Syphilitis in Odyssey of the Blind God

Thanks for your review, criticism is always very helpful. I know that my novel are always rather slow, which annoys many(I guess) but I find myself describing everything in more detail to allow my readers to visualize the things that happen in the novel in a better way. But I guess, that may annoy many :d. Either way, thanks for your review, It's very helpful. I appreciate it!

Well after this i continued to read up to the latest chapters (200) and a few things i have noticed. The details do allow vivid imagery but i noticed sometimes there are repeates of information but i guess you can consider them as friendly reminders. the grammar has fallen off just a little compared to the first 50 chapters but just single words maybe once a chapter so nothing major does not hurt the quality of writing. the overall world building is just now truly picking up as more details over the world (especially the size) is released as well as the reference to other planets. The kidnapped family is not constantly mentioned and not alot of words are wasted on it which is good but still retained as his primary goal (of course i still dont agree with the trope it was done really well) normally authors waste word space constantly bringing up the family to make chapters pass There is no excess of writing just an INSANE amount of detail and thought process of the characters which can get annoying but at least you’ll never have to guess what they are thinking. I do have an issue with his power level as remaining him to be low level but being stronger than most based on the enlargement gains but always leaves him being looked down upon or overlooked (even more than his lack of eyesight) and feel like he truly needs a few powerlevel chapters. He can be the strongest Original and still have more to the story such as the even stronger dungeons and the soon to descend gods. There does not always have to be someone stronger around him because even the strongest human will be weaker than a Dungeon monster. Final thoughts at 200 chapters is that if you get used to the extra details and info It turns to be a great read. it seems to be getting better as it goes on and the cons are slowly going away. Would recommend reading. A little under a 9 right now so i would say 8.8/10 as of chapter 200 and as i said previously it is only going up from the start. Cant wait to see where the novel will be in another 200 chapters.

thank you very much for your new comment. I appreciate it, more than you might think. I will take a look at everything you mentioned and try to improve the novel ;)