Good novel, great story telling. Though seems a bit generic, it still got me hooked. The writing needs a bit of improvement but overall, good job. I wish you luck, author :)
Thanks sir good(shameless) hippo.
As you have pointed out many times, I'm working on improving everything.
I know I'm still lacking many things, I...know.
And I will try my best to improve them.
(Thanks for everything!)