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Waltzing_Yard
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Kind of ticked off for two reasons. Reason 1: It's too unrealistic. I understand that this MAY be a wish fulfilment novel (Not quite sure) but it's a bit too much. Although I hate NTR as much as the next guy, acting in porn isn't about having sex with people you like, it's about getting paid. Seeing the MC forcefully 'bind' the first three girls he acts with just make it seem like he's not cut out for porn. Although I understand the situation he was in, but still, would have liked a more realistic situation. An example of that would be an MC who is sexually attracted to the costars but is emotionally detached. Reason 2: The author notes are longer than the story itself. I understand communication is key, but this is a bit much, no? I don't think the author is gonna read this (since I think this novel is dropped) but hey, it's my attempt to help with constructive criticism.

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