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I really liked reading this book. It had good writing, with some errors here and there and the pace was well kept. It is very interesting and will keep a reader hooked. The world background is alright, since it was not explored more. The character designs are also good and the characters seemed to have a consistent personality. Although there is one thing I would like to let the author know. You use double inverted commas for speaking AND thinking. Because of that it is a bit confusing for me to understand if someone is speaking or thinking. I have not read the whole book, so if you did change it later in the chapters, then its all alright. Anyway, so all in all, I definitely recommend this book. Good Work Author!

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Thank you for the review. I will pay particular attention to the thoughts and how I show them in text. I appreciate you pointing that out :)