Review Detail of Blooddoctor in Twists of life

Whoa! Heheheheee...I screenshot a part that the book said, you should marry your best friend. That's quite a good misherring, author. Your writing style is good, the flexibility, the characters' emotions are well conveyed. I love the twists, the cliffhangers and all. Just with the few chapters I've read I probably went through three phases of emotions. Seriously, I laughed out loud in some places. You are good, author. I recommend this to every romance readers out there. You are gonna love this. The only mistake that kept repeating was separated dialogues of a character with no indication which would make us think it is said by another author. Eg She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And don't touch that cake!" "I won't, I promise." The rectification is below; She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it. And don't touch that cake!" Or She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And Don't touch cake!" She finalised. I hope you understand what I mean.