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Review Detail of Spelloyal in A Second Power Freak

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv112yrSpelloyal

The story is kind of confusing, there are many explanations missing and I really don't understand where this is a fanfic. The author seems to have potential, but I feel he needs to focus more on making the story more fluid and less forced.

A Second Power Freak

Rengoku23

Liked it!

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Rengoku23
Rengoku23AuthorRengoku23

Um, I'm a girl. But thanks for your opinion I will work on making it more fluid.