The only problem I have in this story is whenever you show his progress you introduce stronger villains that he struggles against, which make it seems he made no progress in his powers. You repeat that method alot to the point that the story repeats itself in similar way in a different situation. It gets boring to read the same thing over and over
if you're interested I'm also writing a xianxia webnovel if you have the time you can come take a look and leave a comment on what you think about it
Humbuub:This is author removing my review, or maybe not showing unapproved reviews. Just like the MC and any other characters on this novel, the author sure have no ounce of accountability and remove all forms of non-delusional criticism on this novel. shame smh.image