Review Detail of Kayn21 in I Can Upgrade My Talent In Everything

This has to be one of the worst books on here and this says a lot. If it was free to read, I wouldn’t have minded, but to have the audacity to demand for this is beyond me. The writing is bad, really bad. Switching between tenses constantly and always saying: „He is now standing in front of…“, „He is using his ability now“ feels like I’m reading a police report. If this was all, I’d be annoyed, but the plot could maybe not be necessarily bad, but weird. There are constant time skips. In the First 9 chapters 2 years has already passed and we get to see nothing. The guy literally went from F to B rank like that in 9 chapters. The character interaction, if you can call them that, are weird and we get two oneliners per chapter. Now don’t give me this: „ It will get better after 1000 chapters“ nonsense. You expect me to pay 50€ for this?! This review probably gets deleted, but dear author, maybe this is your first book and English isn’t your first language (isn’t mine either), but then just upload your work for free and if you get better at writing then demand payments otherwise just don’t bother.