Review Detail of UnspeakableBlitz in Star Wars: Rise of Mandalore
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Personally I think the story is great, the author keeps updates consistent and each chapter has very little errors. He fulfills the tags he has put on the story. He also made a character that although strong is also reasonable, he worked for his strength compared to a lot of other stories where they just get guven strength. Overall one of the best star wars stories I have read and is right up there with 'Broke a clone tale'.
Star Wars: Rise of Mandalore
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At worst I would put your story at 4.3 or 4.7. And that is just because of a few spelling errors I have spotted before. The writing quality is great. The character development os great. The characters are great. The progression great/good. The world development is great (+ you are using an already established universe) I can't really think of much wrong wigh the story of the top of my head. And if those gibberish novels that go into thousands of chapters get 5 stars then you deserve if to.
UnspeakableBlitz:At worst I would put your story at 4.3 or 4.7. And that is just because of a few spelling errors I have spotted before. The writing quality is great. The character development os great. The characters are great. The progression great/good. The world development is great (+ you are using an already established universe) I can't really think of much wrong wigh the story of the top of my head. And if those gibberish novels that go into thousands of chapters get 5 stars then you deserve if to.