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UnspeakableBlitz1dCommentedCh 38 Chapter 38- UnspeakableBlitz1dReplied to Eternal_Anonymity
Each were holding a closed fist to stop a punch. Personally I can't open my fridge with a fist.
He raised his right knee toward Stacy's stomach, but she quickly reacted and grabbed it with her hand.detailI'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!Others · ItsJustANightmare - UnspeakableBlitz13dCommented
I like this chapter and feel it played out realistically. Also Gandalf will forever hate the mist demon because of this but he will also always remember it as his own fault. They could likely reconcile if Tom was there but otherwise no. Also will he make his own orc warband instead of following the dark lord?
Ch 27 Carnage - UnspeakableBlitz14dReplied to Harry_6224
In UK a comma is used to break up the number and not to replace a zero.
As he forged on his scarabs became more numerous as he made his production line where it was capable of making full use of the molten necroderumis was forced by anti-gravity holders into a new construction. With it being a tomb spider a thing meant to build Tomb worlds and maintain them using this and his new construction skill set he made new plans of a fortress and expanding his forces as 1 became 2 became 4 and so on till an astonishing 20,00 tomb spiders where working away. With himself going over plans and technology in his to create a reliable cloaking field to hide his stronghold. - UnspeakableBlitz18dCommented
double 20?
Chapter 21: New attributes - UnspeakableBlitz20dCommented
Only add the game or info from it, if you know the game and it's lore. Otherwise it would be best to avoid it.
2. I know that its not canon but would u like it if i would add Shadow of Mordor/War lore to the story? Let me know in the comments - UnspeakableBlitz22dCommented
Armour cool and steel isn't the strongest material in LOTR. Also, armour is better than no armour. More protection less likely to die to random things.
"I am now roughly estimated to be three times as fast and strong as before I devoured Smaug's heart. Unfortunately, I can't breathe fire, but my skin is harder than any steel armor. That's good. So, I don't have to forge armor anymore." - UnspeakableBlitz24dCommented
Meh your story is good. I've got no issues with the grammer.
Is my grammar really so bad as to tell me to write in my native language? - UnspeakableBlitz25dReplied to 56NeutralistsCh 3 Chapter 1
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I wonder what powerful creatures are highly greedy.
"Narzug," said Morgash in a voice vibrating with wisdom and power, "the power of the shamans is deeply rooted in the world of emotions. Once your source is fully saturated, you must learn to absorb the hole core of emotions from powerful creatures. Just as I once devoured the power of a Cave Troll and thereby gained its physical strength, you too must find powerful creatures and absorb their core. But choose these creatures wisely. Eventually, the body reaches its limits, and you can only devour a limited number of creatures." - UnspeakableBlitz28dCommented
Narzug must have been the greatest smith before the soul merge thingy. My orc be a machine. Equipping 2500 orcs... What a monstrous smith.
After a week of hard work, the forge was filled with weapons and armor. Narzug looked at his work with pride. He had created enough equipment to arm an army of 2,500 orcs. Now it was time to mobilize his warriors and prepare them for the impending war. - UnspeakableBlitz28dCommented
Why can't you do a sextuple or vigintuple release? (Joke). Also big thanks for the double release.
Double release for you, as a thank you for all the support you've shown for my fanfiction. - UnspeakableBlitz28dCommented
Hmm, maybe Legolas will return the favour in the future, ir tell Gandalf. which might lead to the ring being destroyed and the firts friendly ish relationship between all races.
Legolas breathed heavily and leaned against a tree. Tauriel watched the darkness where Narzug had disappeared with concern. In her mind, the Orc had narrowly won, but he had been unable to kill Legolas because she had appeared. Legolas thought differently. At that decisive moment, he had already resigned himself to his fate; he knew the Orc could have killed him and then fled. But then something else had appeared in the Orc's eyes besides rage and greed—it was a mix of recognition, kindness, and hesitation. Not something one would expect from an Orc. This moment stayed in Legolas' mind, and he wondered and pondered much about this Orc. - UnspeakableBlitz30dReplied to Geisterlos
I just realised the ring is making him loose ghe positive aspects that he took from greed. As a human he was greedy and jealous of the wealth the rich had so he would work hard to earn it using his greed as motivation. And then when he came to this world he had a passion for blacksmithing and crafting. So when he made his axe he likely fealt pride in his work (which might have caused the axe to now have pride). But with his armour he is too greedy to put in the effort of obtaining it and would rather use illusions to make it seem ss if he had it (like how the illusions turned the water to hold). Basically he has lost his passion die to greed.
The armor was apparently made of a black, shiny metal reminiscent of obsidian-like materials. The surface is adorned with fine, artistic engravings in the Black Speech of Mordor, which run like serpentine lines across the plates. The most striking features were the pointed shoulder pieces and the prominent breastplate, which emphasized Narzug's muscular body. The armor was designed to be both massive and flexible, providing the wearer with both protection and freedom of movement—at least it would if it ever ceased to be merely an illusion. The design appeared both menacing and majestic, with a touch of darkness that perfectly matched Narzug's glowing, menacing eyes. - UnspeakableBlitz1mthCommentedCh 17 Interlude - The Nameless
- UnspeakableBlitz1mthCommentedOf course, a bath or even simple running water was naught but a wet dream for the current me...heh...