Review Detail of Poet_Legion in Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

the biggest problem with the novel is just how the author writes. there's nothing bad about it the story is pretty interesting and it flows pretty well however the worst part of the novel is still the way the author writes. he doesn't know when to implement cursing because when he does it seems very illogical and completely forced. like some of the curses some of the characters spew in the sentences they're using don't even Flow well. and then the author has to always put in a sexual innuendo somewhere or just make one of the paragraphs outright sexual in some way or manner every chapter. I wouldn't care but the amount that it's done and how poorly it's done it's just stupid. like the scenarios make no sense in the way the character speak make no sense it doesn't add any comedic value in my opinion and instead drains from the story