Review Detail of Dotakiin in Sword God in a World of Magic
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The story is technically good, with few errors. The world is expanded upon as needed, learning a bit more than just what is currently used, but leaving things vague enough to leave room for development. I would say this is a good story, but the MC has no real agency, and it doesn't seem like he will ever get any. He was brought to the new world to entertain a god, and he will entertain that god. It doesn't matter what his morals or values are, he will do what the gods wants him to do. Quite frankly, I have no desire to read a story with the main character having no real control over themselves.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Warmaisach
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I hope theres more continents ( at least 3/4 more) can’t fathom how a world with 9 ranks will only have 1. I can already imagine there on some isolated continent where there think it’s the whole world and there’s a few more maybe it’s isolated so that they can keep the abomination locked there and when he leaves he’ll probably be hunted down when they find out he can summon them. I hope there’s a few more with different uses of magic like the summoners. Beast tamers, necromancers, artifacts illusionist alchemy , enhancers etc
Warmaisach:That's due to the power difference. A rat in a cage also has no agency over itself. It's simply not strong enough to escape human control.