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I like this novel very much but so far(22 chapter) I can't say Iiked the MC. Story is good, started a bit dark, lots and lots of potential. But the MC is so immature that it is getting on my nerves. I mean he is 16 years old. I am not saying he should be a man but he should't be this childish at the very least. And secondly there are too much exlamations, "Gasp"s. Apart from these two points everything is very good.
The Tomes of the Lost Mage
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Thanks for the review! I will say the "gasp" moments will definitely decrease over time. Remember, Ojero's life now is nothing like what it was. Everything is new and different from what he expects, so as he acclimates it will change. As for childishness, he is a noble used to being glorified and complimented, and is now in a new situation where he has no power. In that sort of case, even adults become childish.
Take your time with it. The point is he should be annoying. Character development should correct these issues over time. :)
Trim_2cool:Thanks for the review! I will say the "gasp" moments will definitely decrease over time. Remember, Ojero's life now is nothing like what it was. Everything is new and different from what he expects, so as he acclimates it will change. As for childishness, he is a noble used to being glorified and complimented, and is now in a new situation where he has no power. In that sort of case, even adults become childish.