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Yes. Wherever the mana builds up and is released, it takes on the nearest element it can find. Some regions could produce hundreds of different elements, while others could be limited to just a few.
A new series stirs, the spark of life grows stronger. Ojero and Orpham, brothers, their trials are not yet over. One rises while the other falls, but without each other they are nothing. Light and dark, chaos and order, eternity and the end. Where in the disarray with glory be gained? You'll soon find out.
Thanks for the review! I will say the "gasp" moments will definitely decrease over time. Remember, Ojero's life now is nothing like what it was. Everything is new and different from what he expects, so as he acclimates it will change. As for childishness, he is a noble used to being glorified and complimented, and is now in a new situation where he has no power. In that sort of case, even adults become childish.
Tyrion Lannister would certainly agree!
Put them all in agility and spiderman swing your way through the house at one month old
For anyone curious, this mode isnt referencing Tony Stark Ironman. Ironman is a more historical term meaning almost impossible, and many historical games have ironman as a mode where usually you cant save and things are more difficult
I wonder if this is a HOI4 reference
Know I know the author is an avid gamer. We ALL know if a game allows guilds or factions of any kind, the Roman copies come in waves!
If I see the word thus or hence once more time I'm going to explode. Why do authors use it in every other paragraph?
That makes 0 sense. Why do you think handsome people are our models and celebrities? Being good looking gets people to like you not hate you
Thank you for the kind words! I hope to surpass my first novel, and believe I definitely can! I have everything mapped out and planned so it should work very smoothly! I will NOT drop this novel, although there might be times where I don't post chapters. I work 3 jobs, volunteer, have school, and am trying to learn to play piano at the same time! (Not to mention a girlfriend and a social life!) My time is often taken up, but I push them out when I can!
Did teenage you do any different? I know from personal experience almost every teenager is like that. People died for ZERO REASON.