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2021-05-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • Trim_2cool
    Trim_2cool4mth
    Replied to NecroManFan

    I lose motivation fast for them. I start the story in one direction, but quickly trap myself within my own rules. I hope for the Elemental Gems to break that cycle.

    Ch 2 A Spark Ignites
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    The Elemental Gems
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool6mth
    Replied to RayanArcadia

    Yes. Wherever the mana builds up and is released, it takes on the nearest element it can find. Some regions could produce hundreds of different elements, while others could be limited to just a few.

    When a human would interact with them, they could absorb them, leading to fantastic and wondrous abilities. With this sudden boon, more and more societies were able to form and rebuild from the old ruins.
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    The Elemental Gems
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool7mth
    Replied to Amine_Elm

    A new series stirs, the spark of life grows stronger. Ojero and Orpham, brothers, their trials are not yet over. One rises while the other falls, but without each other they are nothing. Light and dark, chaos and order, eternity and the end. Where in the disarray with glory be gained? You'll soon find out.

    Ch 25 Map
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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to NecroManFan

    It will be out soon.

    Ch 44 The Eclipsed Moment
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    The Dark Mark
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to NecroManFan

    Yes, The Dark Mark was dropped, and is currently being remade into another story

    Ch 44 The Eclipsed Moment
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    The Dark Mark
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented
    Here is a map of the continent. It will be in the paragraph comment.
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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to DaoistJjuN1b

    Thanks for the review! I will say the "gasp" moments will definitely decrease over time. Remember, Ojero's life now is nothing like what it was. Everything is new and different from what he expects, so as he acclimates it will change. As for childishness, he is a noble used to being glorified and complimented, and is now in a new situation where he has no power. In that sort of case, even adults become childish.

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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    Tyrion Lannister would certainly agree!

    Actually, now that he was thinking about it, he wanted to die doing something erotic. Maybe sex? He laughed at his unreasonable thoughts.
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    Lord Shadow
    Fantasy · Keikokumars
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to AddictedSolis

    Its funny you make this comment the very day I decided to sit down and continue it. I'll try to make it when I can!

    Ch 13 The Vision
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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    Put them all in agility and spiderman swing your way through the house at one month old

    'Alright, so it looks like I'm starting with eight free stat points and 1 in everything. That's pretty nice for not even being level 1 yet.'
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    The Over-Break System
    Fantasy · ScotchTy
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to XiaoKongxu

    I've read up to chapter 70, but have stopped due to the grammar. Does it get better, and if so, when?

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    Omega Summoner
    Video Games · XiaoKongxu
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    For anyone curious, this mode isnt referencing Tony Stark Ironman. Ironman is a more historical term meaning almost impossible, and many historical games have ironman as a mode where usually you cant save and things are more difficult

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Video Games · Hamapo
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    I wonder if this is a HOI4 reference

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Video Games · Hamapo
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    Know I know the author is an avid gamer. We ALL know if a game allows guilds or factions of any kind, the Roman copies come in waves!

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
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  • Trim_2cool
    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    If I see the word thus or hence once more time I'm going to explode. Why do authors use it in every other paragraph?

    Although his father gave him a disapproving look not believing the story, Daneel could only climb into his bed after shooting him an apologetic smile. He had told his mother that he was tired and that he had already eaten some bread donated by a passerby. Thus, she let him go to sleep after applying the ointment all over his injuries.
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    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • Trim_2cool
    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to DukeFull

    I'm sorry, if that is what you are looking for you won't find it here. I dislike super edgy MCs. The MC will be a villain in many regards, but in a means to an end sort of way. He won't waste lives, and will even save them when he can. He won't be unrealistic by simply being unable to care.

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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to Ullyr

    What chapters have you edited up to? I noticed a drastic drop in quality at chapter 15, so I'm assuming its there.

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    White Online
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Commented

    That makes 0 sense. Why do you think handsome people are our models and celebrities? Being good looking gets people to like you not hate you

    This fact didn't go unnoticed, earning the ire of those standing around him.
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    White Online
    Video Games · Alekzi
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  • Trim_2cool
    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to nihiility

    Thank you for the kind words! I hope to surpass my first novel, and believe I definitely can! I have everything mapped out and planned so it should work very smoothly! I will NOT drop this novel, although there might be times where I don't post chapters. I work 3 jobs, volunteer, have school, and am trying to learn to play piano at the same time! (Not to mention a girlfriend and a social life!) My time is often taken up, but I push them out when I can!

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    The Tomes of the Lost Mage
    Fantasy · Trim_2cool
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    Trim_2cool1yr
    Replied to _Aura_3

    Did teenage you do any different? I know from personal experience almost every teenager is like that. People died for ZERO REASON.

    Seeing that the boy was already ignoring reason just to blame someone, the man who was not obliged to put up with it walked forward towards Harry until his hand grabbed the boy's throat and lifted him off the floor. "Who do you think you're talking to, boy? If you're feeling bad that your little friend died, do you want me to send you to hell with him? We came here to invite you to join us so that we have a better chance of surviving inside here and killing the King of Rats. As we already have 13 people, you will not be missed if an accident were to happen. Do you understand me?" the man asked, as he tightened his grip on the boy's throat.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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