Review Detail of Tom_The_Tom in MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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It’s better than most novels but wouldn’t say it’s amazing. There’s something off with Ren’s personality. It’s like he’s bordering a control-freak edgelord while trying to be a calm, composed, and relatable MC. The dichotomy should be the major personal struggle of the novel but the appeal of it just falls flat. Also if you’re expecting classic Alchemy, then you’d find little of it here. World building could also use a bit more flair as it is lacking and grammar could be better but that’s just a minor issue for me.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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thank you for the review 🙏 the alchemy will happen in middle arcs so thats still a long way. half of the story is his journy to become one and half is when he become one world building is just starting and still dnt have an editor at this point 😅 as to ren's character. it's subjective so i won't comment on that 😂