Review Detail of ReadFalcon in Kin To Shadows

Pretty cool concept but is pretty messy with all the different techniques and system features the author borrows from dozens of different sources. The English is a bit rough but is still readable. This fic does fall into the pitfall of making most of the adults seem stupid while trying to make the MC look cool. Could be worth a read if you like crossover system fics and don't mind the rough writing.