Review Detail of GreedFoxNV in Reincarnation To be NPC Villain With Nerf System

nerf till the end?

Look at the logic in the story, and you'll know.

I use mixed pov

I hope you improve your grammar

is this harem

ah fire how much?

now important question which do you consider your best?

is this harem?

i hope this is not harem

I would love to give you power stone's your story is Danm interesting, but the way the novel is translated into English makes it so, the situations you intended to write or what some character's say even their gender is translated wrong. it's hard or straight up impossible to understand what's going on. From what little I understood in the first few chapters, I give you almost perfect score in story plot for now, if not because I can't understand more then this. Thank you though for your dedication and I sincerely hope and wish for better translation, I really want to read this.

Guys! guy's, I just came back to say that while not perfect it becomes readable in chapter 7

So? No harem

Ok thanks

Thank you for giving me hope, the first two chapters I read were rough to say the least

I’m still confused is this a harem or not