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Brother's Qing's Manor
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LIKEGomtuu76:yeah it was about a grandpa blacksmith finally unlocked his system and it was a forge system so he reformed himself. kinda sucked cause the story was about some 80 year old guy.
concept is great but no connectivity when u are walking in q road the author would suddenly talk about how a guy is sitting in his home or that the mc has kids or grand kids and even try to add hot shots and other things here i don't get it ! this is pure bad doesn't have much fluidity it's worse than a newbie author this website always makes my expectations lower than what it was hats off
Gomtuu76:yeah it was about a grandpa blacksmith finally unlocked his system and it was a forge system so he reformed himself. kinda sucked cause the story was about some 80 year old guy.