I want to give your story a try, but it just looks like it is soaked in cliches. I'm not sure if you've seen how many similar stories there are like the premises you have right now in webnovel. I understand that there might be frustration with the quality of some, which would inspire some to create a better novel using the same premise, or simply inspired by their masterpieces, but it seems to me you are pumping quantity over quality. I just saw that you have joined just 3 days ago and already have 5 stories? I'm really worried that if I do start to read that you might get burnt out immediately and resort to copying other books with even more cliches. **please don't take this negatively as I understand that you might simply be a new author and are looking for room of growth, but I'm curious what you are using to make your novel stand out from the rest.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It was enjoyable while it lasted. I hope someday you might find the interest to continue writing.

Are you going to continue this story?

Think of how much potential you story has left, from the actual storyline plot to the potential develolpment of your character, as well as guild affairs. School is a priority but writing could be like a side hobby. I mean you can plan out a story line and create chapters when you want to. Don’t drop it yet, personally I’m fine with erratic update schedules unless there’s a big clif hanger

The novel itself is great with a good Mc….. However I think it’s dropped: https://www.mtlnovel.com/with-a-crippled-spiritual-core-i-become-the-boss-of-the-cultivation-world/v2-let-me-tell-you-one-more-thing/ :(

Think I found the copy: https://wuxiaworldsite.com/novel/blacksmith-the-tempering-begins-with-ones-flesh-wuxia-world-novel/

sorry for late reply, i only check my notifs on this site occasionally, and my answer to your question is another question, what do you expect from this community who spam random reviews on most novels making the star system totally useless? also, if you really don't like me doing this, than voice your opinion as well by making a forum or post this comment on every single review. sorry for being a bit sensitive, i just don't like the logic behind your comment. :P

Yeh ik :(, someone helped fix my mistake later. However, if I delete this comment it will make it confusing. Anyway just take the main point from this, he wasted half of his savings without any pain in his heart.

You can't say it's completely different though... Ch 2 Choosing Gu Worms ----> Ch 28 Stone Gambling ----> Ch 29 Red Toad Gu, 100,000 Primeval Stones. Idk man, I see some similar events here... I mean it might be good in your opinion, but there is definitely some inspiration coming from Revered Insanity.

o i see now, i got confused because I didn't pay attention to the lvl. In the text when I was making this, I only paid attention to the chunk of text that showed the Profound Heaven Sword Technique being upgraded 3 times and than resulting in an upgrade fail. Thanks for the clarification :)

nope for the last one its -400k because his level of the skill was originally 2 he made it lvl 5 and "slipped his finger" which adds another so -400k

bear drops poison skill book lmao

CAP! skill said it was 3 meters and would go through anything in its way... does that mean he can adjust the distance? instant step = SSSS class skill

if the invisibility is SSS class then what is the value of teleportation? It literally only has a 2 second cooldown and can pass through walls... SSSS grade?

why put 1 mil copper coins, whats the point? its like coming up to a job and saying the extra reward is 1 mil cents. Also, wasn't it said before that he could convert a spirt stone into an ingot. So why can't he convert gold coins into something or silver ones if they exist?

could someone explain where the 2 extra ingots and 100k copper coins come from? I thought he only got charge points. Where did all this come from?

400k - 300k = 100k YESSSS NOT A BS NOVEL phew

he raised it 6 time because of the "lvl failed" its supposed to be 900k but whatever cause the author made it 1mil. So rn it should be 400k from the author. I just hope its right