Good Idea. However is let down by the author trying to get us to feel bad for the MC and to put him down. Going over 20 chapters with no real wins for the MC. Paid chapters start at 20 and there is no significant development to tell if you want to pay to continue. In the 20 chapters it still feels like what other books would do with 5. I think it'd a great idea to have already lived the novel. But there is no real power fantasy from having the foresight of the future which makes it feel awkwars
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